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If i was... Dragonborn If i was... Dragonborn

Rated 4 / 5 stars

1st what i review here is meant for "If i was... Ezio Auditore" too...
preaty good work nice design animations are good maybe the sound quality of the voices could be a bit better but okay at all its still funny and entertaining...
but there are 2 small things i think u should improve a preloader or menu with start button and an end screen with replay button or something like that would make it much better and should not be to hard to make... try it it will make ur work looks much more "professional"
at all realy good work keep it up


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Guitar Hero The SP Band Guitar Hero The SP Band

Rated 5 / 5 stars

im usualy not a fan of the stick genre cause often its all the same and maybe here and there a nice effect and thats it...
of cause i know there are some realy good stick flashs from good stick animators but im skeptical when im start looking a stick flash...
but i realy have to say you get the shit out of this genre... realy awsome style much nice effects and although you keept the classic battle elements of the stick genre in you didnt let it look like the most of it...
At all 5 Stars... awsome stuff!



Yellow's Chorus Concert Yellow's Chorus Concert

Rated 4 / 5 stars

At all it was a good movie... even if didnt laught to much but maybe its just not my kind of humor but one thing u should had make better insert an end and a repeat button...keep up working
cya



Craftyy - "Plant an Idea" Craftyy - "Plant an Idea"

Rated 5 / 5 stars

its not the flash at all that scores but the idea...
i love the open source idea and wich contains the thinking that people can do stuff get better when working together...
cant wait to see the fruits of this


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The Train Of Consciousnes The Train Of Consciousnes

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Realy a great piece of art


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Tourettes T-rex Tourettes T-rex

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

wrong name but anyway

realy good thing dude the name wasnt choosen well but anyway...
work on ur design & grafic stuff... its non blam its just what i think u could work on most...



W40k Dawn of Awesome 3 W40k Dawn of Awesome 3

Rated 4 / 5 stars

did u know w40k is useually a tabletop,,,,

"When did this happen and what motivated me to make this" maybe some psycho active stuff would explain the lightshow and what that i think it was a necro does to the seargent... but back to review...
1st i like that warhammer thing its a game that wasnt used 1000times already for a parody...
2nd how should i say... it has its own style (what it look like) of cause its a parody and they look often a bit crapy and thats okay but i think some things could be drawn in a different way just a littel bit... its only my opinion the design is okay but it could be a bit cooler...
3th sound is okay voices are fine the soundtracks maybe u could have choosen something less popular but... i guess it wasnt that big project of u to think that far...
4th story is äh yeah its short and has some simple plot but okay...

just u know i dont want to say that its bad just give u feedback and since there is nothing that is perfect its just critism what could be made better...
i have seen u have lot submissions already i only tryed it one or two times but never realy made someting but im still artist and maybe it would be good if u would more often try something out how to animate, design stuff just to get more skills like an heavy metal guitarist should can play an electric and an acoustic guitar...

i bet u already thing "what does this idiot want from me?!"...
i think ur good at this flash thing but it could be awesome if you just always try try try and keep on...
cya


Battosai810 responds:

Man that's a wall of text in need of some spellcheck.

This isn't really intended as a Flash with anything really resembling story, artistic talent, or integrity. I got a goofy voice acting clip from Dawn of War II and made a really goofy animation in like 2-3 hours from it. Watch just about any other cartoon from 2010 to see what I can actually make when I put time into it.

I'm well aware 40k is a tabletop game. I've been playing for about 6 years and I do commission miniatures painting.


Nerds can never love Nerds can never love

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Its to the point

1st why this dude already got dragon age 2 damn it is it some sort of beta gameplay tester im waiting for it about a half year and half to wait at least another month... :D
then i dont know what the other reviews had its not to short its just to the point of course u could do more stuff in it but it would only destroy the message...
its realy good done grafics are fine for an flash in this lenght sound is well made and the story got fun and sadness in once...
fun in the storyline and sadness in truth...
and thats something the most flashes dont have a message that bother the most people this much that they already forgoten it...
this one picked it up and smashes them into the face in a sarcastic way...
This is REAL ART... great job.



Luminiscense Luminiscense

Rated 5 / 5 stars

realy great work

this thing is realy great work nice animation and sound everythings just realy awesome



The Subway The Subway

Rated 3 / 5 stars

keep up working

i have seen realy much flash works there where many first trys of people and i must say ur is one of best first flashes i have seen so far... but of course there is much to work on no master is fallen out of the sky yet.
the design and animation are okay but will improve with experiance...
the audio its okay (much first trys didnt even have sound -.-) but maybe u should look for some sounds at the internet insted of blowing in ur mic...
most u have to work on ur storyline and that stuff cause i didnt get it what this flash realy is about :-s
dont let my rating of 6 get u down its more than most early submits gets from me but u get potencial to do better so try it


LazyCrazyLuis responds:

Thanks men, I will try to do it more better, but who know, this is my first try, i like the animations so i will learn with the time.