razevortex's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eggspionage Action]

Keep it on

Idea, Story and Fun are REALY good...
just keep on working on animation and maybe a bit on design...
i know its not that easy to get them but some more sound effekts or voice would be cool to...
Sure that all is much hard work but keep it on and im sure ur stuff could made it on the frontpage...

[The transforming ball]

to rule

this flash shows some skill with an story and longer it would be good but to rule the world u have to insert some kind of audio what would it be for a world without sound?

[JD Showreel 2010]

just a second

maybe u should choosen an other loader just a second wont fit some user since the flash size is 10 mb ;D but at all its an nice showreel about ur submissions from last year but i didnt get it shouldnt be it named jd showreel 2009 then ?
btw nice music...
fazit: good work but would more like to see some new work you could use for ur next showreel ;) keep on

[6Things Kites Think About]

like i thought

when i was loading the movie i thought about i didnt know that kites think about everything and looks like i was right... at all i think its good and this idea didnt need more work but i coming submissions maybe some longer flash with a plot could give u a much better rating...

[Apple iPaper]

Paper is awesome

nice idea about that brainwashing commercials the industrie show us every day sadly paper was realy a technological breakthrough for humans but the flash is nice anyway

[Shower Products for Men]

Where can i buy this stuff ?

damnd awsome great idea well made keep on doing stuff like that

[Badly Drawn Dragon]

omg

omg that pure thing what should be a dragon looks realy crapy... but maybe that fits him into the flash... i realy dont know maybe its the much to high pitched music but i liked it even if i had to make a screen to read the moral xD

darkmagewizard3 responds:

Wow, thanks!

[Stamp on the Ground]

Everyone

i wasnt sure at the begining but then came some characters that got me man as "day of the tentacle" never suspected to see something of it again... Awesome!

[To The Army]

Sorry

sorry that i was offending you in my review befor that was not my motiv...
but my oppinion is that you should work on a couple of things...
here are a few points i think about when im rating a submission:
1)
There a some flashs with a bit lazy design but a funny or good plot and cause of that they are still awesome...
2)
or like some stickmovies that have realy special animations lots of effects like in some kind of action movie thats cool too...
3)
some flashes otherwise are that good designed that i must give them a high score cause of it even when the story is not my flavor...
4)
another thing often forgotten is the length of an animation there are good short movies with a good joke or some that just get u start thinking...
5)
of cause there are submits out there that not dont got perfectly worked out some seems more then a sketch just an idea that quickly maded but sometimes its just a realy good idea with some inovation something realy new that let me give some points or maybe ir hit just my sense of humor...

Dont let bad review(s) hit u to hard and keep on working at it... Maybe think about some points i wrote above cause i think moste here will review and rate neary or just a bit like that... I know the start is always hard so keep working harder and u get a score 10 by me next time... but this time im SORRY!

[Awesome Compilation Vol 2]

Egorawsome

love it! If they where real is best... for find the easter egg just tabing until u see the smiley ;)